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利弊類 – 環(huán)保話題
More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?
題目大意：越來越多的人開私車。這種潮流對(duì)個(gè)人的好處和對(duì)環(huán)境的壞處哪個(gè)更大?
思路：
題目問的是利弊，可以用三種回答：1)利>弊， 2)弊>利 3)利弊相等
在利弊的PK時(shí)，要注意2點(diǎn)：1)對(duì)單個(gè)利弊的論證的合理性;2)兩者比較的側(cè)重，即在嚴(yán)重性方面能體現(xiàn)出一方>另一方;
分析利弊時(shí)，盡量從多個(gè)角度闡述，多問問自己這個(gè)好處是否站得住腳，或這個(gè)壞處是否是不可解決的;讓論證更嚴(yán)密;
關(guān)鍵詞
advantages of this trend for individuals: 對(duì)好處有明確限定——針對(duì)個(gè)人
disadvantages for environment：對(duì)壞處也有明確限定——針對(duì)環(huán)境
提綱梳理如下：
范文
It has been a popular trend that a growing number of people tend to buy their own cars. While its benefits to individuals are beyond doubt, I would say that detrimental effects of the driving trend on environment are far outweighing.
From an individual perspective, the trend of life-on-wheels can be seen as positive for both comfortable and convenient reasons. Firstly, it is not difficult to imagine the comfort of driving to work in comparison with the feeling of being sandwiched in the packed subway during rush hours. Also, for some travelers who need to commute between cities frequently, driving by themselves is sometimes a relatively more affordable and convenient alternative to air flights, which is more expensive and irritating when considering the cumbersome security procedures at airports, if not the common place delay.
However, these superficial benefits mentioned above are not justified enough to offset its damage to the environment. Out of all the problems,the carbon dioxide commissions stand out as the most serious symptom of the problem to which I see the prevailing driving lifestyle as the answer. Another apprehension we cannot afford to ignore is potential exhaustion of fuel energy with the rising number of cars. Some might argue that both problems could be mitigated by the electronic car, which are reckoned as a cleaner and energy saving alternative to its traditional counterparts in the near future.Nevertheless, this might lead to a new problem: how to deal with the discarded old models? Given the fact that most of their materials and engines arenon-biodegradable, they might stay in the junk yard for decades.
In conclusion, although the benefits of private cars cannot be denied, I would say these merits for individuals should be at the sacrificeof environment.
相關(guān)詞匯：
Detrimental 有害的
Sandwich 被夾在中間
Commute 往返穿梭
Irritating 惱人的
Cumbersome 繁瑣的
Superficial 表面的
Symptom 病癥
Prevailing 泛濫的
Apprehension 擔(dān)憂
Mitigate 減少
Non-biodegradable 無法降解的
Sacrifice 犧牲
相關(guān)句型：
While its benefits arebeyond doubt, I would say that detrimental effects are far outweighing.
… can be seen as positive for both comfortable andconvenient reasons.
… are not justified enough to offset its damage to … .
… stand out as the most serious symptom of the problem towhich I see … as the answer
